englisch:feedback-text
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| ^✅ first-person perspective^❌ general statement^ | ^✅ first-person perspective^❌ general statement^ | ||
| - | |I like that you had a good introduction.|< | + | |**I like** that you had a good introduction.|< |
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| + | The first-person perspective makes it clear that this is your point of view and that someone else might see things differently. A general statement on the other hand might feel like an unchangeable fact – which usually doesn’t make sense when giving feedback. | ||
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| ===== What you can say to start with … ===== | ===== What you can say to start with … ===== | ||
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| ===== If you don’t agree or don’t understand … ===== | ===== If you don’t agree or don’t understand … ===== | ||
| - | In this case you say that you’re surprised by something or you could ask questions: | + | In this case you can say that you’re surprised by something or you could ask questions: |
| ==== Expressing surprise ==== | ==== Expressing surprise ==== | ||
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| Your feedback could be structured like this | Your feedback could be structured like this | ||
| - | - **Describe** what **impression** the text left on you. | + | - **Describe** what **impression** the text left on you. \\ \\ |
| - | - **Highlight** one section that you think is **especially good** and **explain why**. | + | - **Highlight** one section that you think is **especially good** and **explain why**. |
| - | - **Comment on** one section that you think **could be improved** and **explain why and how**. | + | - **Comment on** one section that you think **could be improved** and **explain why and how**. |
| - | - **Name** one section that you think **should be longer** and **explain why**. | + | - **Name** one section that you think **should be longer** and **explain why**. |
| - Give one **example** that** you would write differently** and **show how you would do it**. | - Give one **example** that** you would write differently** and **show how you would do it**. | ||
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